What is it about this outfit that’s not working? 

Separately the elements are fine. Altogether it might be too much? Especially in this material? The loose top with the open sleeve would be cute over a pair of more fitted pants, right? The pants…

I think I’m struggling with the pants. Because you can’t sit in these pants. The minute you sit, they crease. And when they crease, without structure, with the top billowing above, I don’t know, the overall look just might need a polish, you know?